Being a celebrity can bring many benefits and problems. What are the problems and what solutions can be taken?
It is an ever-present issue, that a normal way of living is not possible for every eminent personality; they have to compromise certain aspects of life. A number of challenges are there, which they have to deal with on their daily routine, and it can be curb to some extent through adopting several measures.
Perhaps the major problem is that a well-known person encounter is the violation of their privacy rights, particularly while they visit any public places. For instance, it is quite natural, when a film star visit to any public facilities like shopping mall and cinema, their followers tend to gather around, which prevent them to continue with the purpose of visit. Another gravest threat is the surveillance of media, especially family magazines and programs often report information about the famous people's personal as well as professional life. Moreover, those reporters exaggerate the actual truth in order to entertain the target audience. Thus, every popular person has to behave carefully and act accordingly to retain their popularity. Otherwise, it would provide a room for social media to embroil them in fake news.
Turning to the possible solutions, resolute handling is inevitable to avoid the consequences of creating a negative impression. Firstly, it would be better to confine themselves with family members, when it comes to family matters. Secondly, an honest response to the public through social media, amidst scandals or rumours if any is a possible remedy from exacerbating the same. Finally, minimizing the situations of exposing to the public would contribute to curtailing the probability for creating rumours.
To conclude, popularity is not considered a normal part of life. Although it provides a myriad of advantages, it is easy to attain a negative image and an unrelenting approach is imperative throughout their life to protect their reputation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89353877919 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1589317079 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0470904850504 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0147093727442 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032819557719 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0298104935762 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303632467249 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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