Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. Some people think that the best way to reduce crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solutions can you suggest?
In many cases, committing an offence involves alcoholic intoxication of an offender. Therefore, it is believed by some individuals that the most effective measure is to prohibition of sailing alcohol. In my opinion, no alcohol law is not practical because of the number of reasons.
First, level of criminal activity depend on different factors such as level of education, social standards of living in a particular country, availability of social programs and alcohol intake plays the last role in it. For instance, some countries had already introduced the law prohibiting alcohol liquors and this action was ineffective and even increased level of an organized crime due to underground sails of alcohol. As a result, governments of mentioned countries were forced to revoke the law.
The key to mitigating criminal activity is increasing social standards of living and implementation of social programs for the poorest part of population. It is known that the free medical care, unemployment allowance, social kindergartens, shelters for homeless people and other measures addressed to solving basic human needs significantly reduce criminal situation in an area. This is because law-abiding citizens would never commit a crime if they were not desperate. In addition, free educational programs for low-income groups will help them to receive skills for the earning and they will not break the law.
In conclusion, I believe that alcohol restriction will not effective in combating crime because people will buy it illegally and as a result contradictory it may increase crime rates. Consequently, it is recommended to fight against criminal activity by improving the level of living and introducing social and educational programs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ountries were forced to revoke the law. The key to mitigating criminal activity ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5447761194 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11154432142 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3170755002 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204986154191 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07783730611 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676010986182 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137523496971 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408819294866 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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