technology has made children less creative than they were in the past

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...echnology has made humans more dependent .They don't really use their brains....
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... creativity like using different crayons,clay,water colors.Whereas now people have no...
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...ing different crayons,clay,water colors.Whereas now people have no time for creativity ...
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...s now people have no time for creativity ,so they share e-cards or GIF images of g...
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...cial media platforms for example:watssup,instagram and facebook. Moreover,many food deli...
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...early days people made food by their own ,added ingredients ,garnishing,experiment...
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...o use their analytical ,reasoning brain.But nowadays kids have computer games ,whil...
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...rd attached to the computer. To sum up,some people say that technology has made chi...
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...ology has made children less innovative.Others say that technology has made children m...
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...hnology has made children more creative.But in my opinion technology has made the c...
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... made the children use their brains less .They go with smart work rather than hard...
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...ade the children use their brains less .They go with smart work rather than hard wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76470588235 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93540168291 2.67179642975 147% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.1344086022 358% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 276.586672672 48.9658058833 565% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 416.5 100.406767564 415% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.25 20.6045352989 351% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.75 5.45110844103 656% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400385329675 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.32717142207 0.076458572812 428% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.230000415958 0.0737576698707 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32717142207 0.150856017488 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230000415958 0.0645574589148 356% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 11.7677419355 355% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 58.1214874552 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 6.10430107527 316% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 10.1575268817 320% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.31 10.9000537634 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.47 8.01818996416 143% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 10.002688172 320% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.0537634409 306% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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