A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.
state contribution has important effects for the development of countries in various ways. governments would like to have tendency commonly associated with widespread supports to citizens. also, as a result of encouraging private sector by statesmen, increases acceleration in growth. For consistent politics, the most appropriate revealed pattern is private and public firm coordination.
First of all, the government is responsible to conduct investments of all kind of areas. these include defence capabilities and social securities. Personal companies always take into consideration profit and this situation returns individuals as considerable expenditures. However, governers of a country care about services to be provided to citizens when make an investment. Meanwhile, governments may opt remain secondary in certain matters while planning the future of nations. even so, they must organize or confine explicitly and comprehensively the projects. To recapitulate, people demand to sense the reliable and faithful existence of state in every field.
Furthermore, presence and impact of for-profit business is also crucial for nations. Through these companies, non-profit organizations are more likely attempt to adjust more critical and essential complications. Additionally, they can make significant initiatives, even in military sphere, when they are given the occasion, cover some of economical burden and put forward solutions. Nonetheless, as a result of competitive environment, service and prizes becomes affordable, so local people can benefit. Consequently, having individual entrepreneurs advance assistances and utilities.
To conclude, with state audits are added to coordination of profit and non-profit firms, the most accurate and appropriate service is provided to citizens. In my mind, support and supervision of country rulers should be in every field.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight.How far do you agree with either of these views? 89
- A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. 89
- Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 95
- Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.Discuss both these views 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, while, even so, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09737827715 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34404288923 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681647940075 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8531098045 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142610448601 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404625898016 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452905733601 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816021102036 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053643713219 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.51 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.