Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
With increasing technology, there has been serious leap on usage of social media in daily life. Currently, there are numerous benefits in terms of fast communication and job opportunities. it also includes threats such as spread of false news to more people and social disorders. Considering these situations, internet should be utilized more carefully by users.
A common opinion is that development of smart phones has triggered rate of social media usage. this phenomenon, dramatically has increased the communication speed of individuals on a global scale. Particularly, due to Facebook and twitter users who imitate as reporters, an incident in any part of world has been reached an instantly learnable surface. Furthermore, world’s agenda can be changed with explanations that are made up of statesmen on twitter. Additionally, through social media, it has created dozens of new job description such as social media experts, content managers and provided employment thousands of people. Lastly, …..
social media can be problematic for adolescents. With the contents of this platforms, young brains are exposed to mental attacks and may experience problems such as sleep disorders. this condition might be cause dangerous psychological and characteristic damages on a person’s future life. In addition, owing to absence of an organization that can control social media, unreal news are more likely to spread quickly and affect opinion of many people. For these reasons, necessary precautions should be taken while using the internet.
To conclude, although use of social media caused some problems, after utilizing carefully, advantages outweigh the drawbacks. I strongly believed that, internet might be the most effective breakthrough invented afterword of computers in last century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77859778598 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11643223719 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649446494465 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3167458219 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252642602831 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795525996027 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963316364552 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157147396676 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238591366199 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.