It is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline.
Do you agree or disagree?
Watching movies has become one of the main passions in our daily routine since the appearance of the cinematography. Nowadays a lot of cinemas remain empty, because people prefer to stay at home and enjoy films on the screens of their gadgets rather than visiting movie theatre. I completely agree to this statement and believe that cinema outing will lose its popularity quite soon.
First of all, the ticket at the cinema cost a lot and the price is increasing from year to year. If cinema lovers visit movie theatre at weekends and buy popcorn or a Coke, they must be ready to bid farewell to several thousand rubbles. For example, last time my friends and I spent all our scholarship on booking tickets to “Gone with the wind”. This situation spoilt our mood and enriched the owner of the cinema. Thus, as the proverb says, “ if you look after pennies, the dollars will look after themselves’.
What is more, the meaning of convenience has increased in the 21st century. Limitation of freedom in the screening room makes humans feel uncomfortable. For example, no one is able to stop the movie in the cinema, while visiting the bathroom, but all of these is allowed at home. In addition to that food prepared by cinema staff is unhealthy and can even be tasteless in contrast to home cooking. In other words, the atmosphere in the person’s flat is unique and obviously cozier than in any movie theatre.
Taking everything into consideration I would like to say, that the amount of cinemas is gradually decreasing. It can be concluded that the majority of film fans choose comfort and economy, thereby contributing to reduce screening rooms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9014084507 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76304815954 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640845070423 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8668528857 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229872561346 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676860661163 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401373841571 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125080759039 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524705504277 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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