More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
The problem related to increase of workers` productivity and quality of job has always been significant for employers. Nowadays the number of labors working from home is constantly growing. I am convinced that this tendency is positive due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
I strongly believe that online job is beneficial as far as it helps to save time and do not waste it on the road. To put it differently, due to globalization and traffic congestions, the time workers spend in transport going to their workplaces is high. For example, according to the survey held by Moscow Sociological University, overwhelming majority of city dwellers waste more than ten hours a week commuting to job. Thus, in order to save employees` precious time, managers may encourage their endeavour to work from home.
However veracious it sounds, I would not agree with the opinion that remote work is negative, due to its positive impact on labours` motivation and mood. Admittedly, if individuals do their job online, they will be possible to spend more hours with their family members. Therefore, an opportunity to be with the near and dear contribute to improvement of workers` spirits and provide more passion to labour. For instance, over the covid-19 pandemic, when almost all the office employees worked from home, spouses and children helped people to stay emotionally stable and not get depressed. Hence, emotional condition, which is considered to be significant for efficient work process, may be supported by the permission to do the job online.
To conclude, in my opinion, labour at home is a positive tendency due to the lack of necessity to waste extra time on transport. Moreover, it fosters to the improvement of employees mood and desire to work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17708333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06898681543 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0975076914 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18982087112 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652991069401 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322665628928 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117057452855 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173112388881 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.