You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for job.
Write a letter to the shop or company with supplied the equipment.
In your letter,
~ describe the problem with the equipment.
~ explain how this problem is affecting your work
~ say what you went the shop or company to do
Dear sir/madam
I am smith, writing this letter to complain you about the failure of a device which I had bought from your shop.
As I work in home as cook, I had purchased an electric oven three months ago. It was a great help for me to manage my works as faster as possible. Although, three weeks ago the machine got disturbed and it became a burden on me to finish my works on time.
Actually, I am working in a house where almost 15 members stay together. It is my responsibility to prepare food items for all of them. I have to prepare different types of cuisines for children and grown up people based on their diet chart. The electric oven used to help me a lot and now the condition is too dull and complicated for me. I have to wake up too early to get everyone's food requirements ready before they leave home for work and studies.
The company had given me five years warranty on the product and you offered me services on request. So I hope your expert would visit my home and fix the issue or do the needful as soon as possible
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Smith
P.H. 01234567890
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam I am smith, writing this letter to compl...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...elp for me to manage my works as faster as possible. But three weeks ago the machi...
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Line 25, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you soon. Yours sincerely Smith P.H. 01234567890
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Line 27, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you soon. Yours sincerely Smith P.H. 01234567890
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37096774194 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24695809327 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3269437878 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0714285714 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15670834552 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490940027871 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406310986794 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894122064249 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554422777981 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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