Some people believe that young people should follow the older generation’s example. Others, however, disagree and believe that it’s good to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There has been an utter change in the lifestyles of people thanks to the information technology and globalization. Nowadays, it is said as wise to obey the footprints, old-age citizens, in the turning points of one’s life. However, some people argue that the best way is to go with own tastes and insights rather than obeying the advice of senior generation. I believe although, international culture does not need guidance from parental figures, the experiences shared by them have a major role in success.
Firstly, as the axiom goes ‘as people get older, people get wiser’, a handful of people trusts the opinions of the most experienced members of the society. To put it in another, many individuals consider experience is the best teacher and accept or request for some advice each and every moment of life as they touch stoned their skills, such as, by solving problems, building teams and leading a wonderful life on the planet earth. So, they have acquired much of insights what might happen in certain situations that the present generation could face when experimenting on their turning points.
Secondly, since the present generation is friendly with the advanced amenities they are able to meet the needs faster than in the previous decades. In other words, people are able to control or perform multiple tasks more efficiently and effectively than old age people could imagine once. As a result, the insights of senior citizens have no room in the day-to-day activities of the present generation.
To conclude, whether to follow the thoughts and guidance of geriatric or it is good to decide oneself is debated among many. However, I believe would be better considering their experiences up to a certain level and exploring the world oneself in the fields where there is no hand for the wisest generation.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11221122112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7577925861 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1498519374 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24007057895 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074776675739 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901587446436 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124735102054 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570144372235 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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