There in no gainsaying that nowadays, changes have a higher pace than the past. Due to technology and science progress, every aspect of the human beings' lives are changing profoundly in short time. Some people believe that this high speed changes have adverse effect on human beings' lives and people are less happy than the past. In contrast, some other hold an opposite view. From my perspective, the high pace of the changes have positive effects on the people satisfying. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate my points of view.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that the rapid changes especially in technology and science have far reaching impacts on people's heath. There is no doubt that people satisfaction is dependent to their health. In better words, people who live these days access to better medical cure than the past. For example, in the past people suffered pains and they should endure painful surgeries, but doctors cure sick people more easily like using robots for surgery and people are not required to endure painful methods. Therefore, people are more satisfies these days, since the technological and scientific changes provide better services for being healthy.
Second point that comes to my mind is that people are more convenient these days rather than past due to progress in technology and science. To put in apposite words, people in the were are forced to do some physical activities like farming, instead, these days are able to enjoy their convenient lives. People do their works via easy ways via technology and they spend less time and energy for their activities. Take computer as a good example, computers have been changing during few years, they have a better stylish design and have less weight than past. As a result, people especially students are able to carry them with themselves easily and student are capable to research and study more convenient. All in all, Are students more satisfied these days or when they have no access to internet and computer. Hence, people are more satisfied these days than past.
The last but not least, communication are changed rapidly and it is undeniable that social networking are the result communication revolution. In other words, social network is the production of the communication changes. In my opinion, the positive aspects of social networks are clear. For instance, people are able to be familiar with various issues and persons via social networks and find proper information for having a better life. In result, rapid change in communication provide a better life for people than the past that they just knew about their nearby.
In conclusion, contemplating all aforementioned paragraphs, people are more satisfied than past since rapid change alter their lives to more convenient and healthier life. Moreover, they are capable to develop their relation with various people.
- TPO 47- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site. 76
- TPO 36 integrated writing 3
- TPO 21 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement For success in a future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 80
- TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re more satisfied these days than past. The last but not least, communication ar...
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Message: Did you mean 'new'?
Suggestion: new
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lop their relation with various people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in short, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2421.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16204690832 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56028553754 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46908315565 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6773127733 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.84 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.76 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230496402503 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743728914005 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511981452244 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147325589083 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321018668107 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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