Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career… It is said: "A woman’s place is in the home." What do you think?
Nowadays,women tasks and roles in the modern life have been a widespread discussion. while some people believe that their role must be limited in their homes, others argued that they can properly
play a major role in the workforce beside their maternity tasks. In my opinion,
I agree with the latter view, for several reasons which which will be discussed in this essay.
First and foremost, women have already proven their advantage in scoring higher academic results in various subjects. According to a recent study in Stanford university, from 1998 to 2018, the percentage of ladies who achieved a bachelor degree in engineering was 60%. However, the number of women, in the US, who works in engineering workforce is only 10%. And while their higher academic records should prove their higher
technical and scientific priorities, companies prefer to hire men to maintain sustainability as men do not take maternity subsidies or incentives. As a result, women are often focussing on more academic achievements hence they hopefully find suitable jobs.
Additionally, women are naturally have multi-tasked characteristics. It is obviously clear that a wide number of them can successfully handle their jobs alongside with their motherhood responsibilities. Moreover, they are also highly emotional than men, which results in having higher communication skills, and deeper understanding of others feelings, needs, and wellings. Thus, if corporations offered equality in managarial opportunities, women could be better leaders.
In conclusion, in today's life, I think women have equal or even better skills than men, according to their proved educational achievements, and their natural leadership characteristics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , women
Nowadays,women tasks and roles in the modern life have...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...life have been a widespread discussion. while some people believe that their role mus...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Play
... others argued that they can properly play a major role in the workforce beside th...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: which
...th the latter view, for several reasons which which will be discussed in this essay. ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technical
...mic records should prove their higher technical and scientific priorities, companies pr...
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Line 15, column 36, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... Additionally, women are naturally have multi-tasked characteristics. It is obv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68076923077 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16438202647 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657692307692 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9006006772 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304959594955 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088680735759 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613454563197 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127611992334 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071898624042 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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