Some people believe that it is better to grow up children in cities rather than in the countryside. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
it is important to consider the environment where our children should be raised in. While some people believe that it would be much convenient to raise the minors in countryside rather than in a big city, others argue that the latter is better for several reasons.
On the one hand, raising kids in countryside might be more convenient as the society in such areas is smaller, and the life-style is simpler than in big cities. this not only leads to less complications between schoolboys, but also results in a lower crime rate among teenagers. A recent study by the Canadian psychological Association illustrated that bullying rate in secondary schools in Manitoba, which is an urban province in Canada, is quarter the number of which in Ontario. Thus, it is believed that countrysides' children could have healthier psychology and safer childhood.
On the other hand, big cities can sufficiently provide minors with the state-of-the-art education which is provided in a myriad types of schools, hence hopefully preparing them,by watching and experiencing, to achieve high standard levels of knowledge that can trigger their future careers. The results or such modern lifestyle is raising successful future workers. To illustrate this idea, a recent research, which was established by studying four massive corporations in the US, showed that the number of workforce pioneers who were raised in big cities are 70% higher than the number of those who grew up in countryside.
In conclusion, although there is a number of psychological and social advantages of raising children in urban areas, In my opinion, growing up in big cities is a better option for today's children because of the higher life standards and educational facilities that can nourish their futures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95211397408 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7631893717 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180617397135 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627716892292 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668600526624 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115455134897 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581125403222 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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