It is irrfutable to say that health and physical games both are equal important to lead a better life. While the argument is that goverenment spend some money on these facilities. Whereas, rest of the masses ponder that it is less important because of numerous reasons, and I believe that both sides are important. Therefore, I will discuss both sides along with my viewpoint in up coming paragraphs.
To commence with, health is extremely beneficial as compared to other factors. If government spend a lion share of money on sports, then youngsters will stay fit and healthy, and they can become better citizens in their up coming future. For example, many children are interested in sport therefore, if they will gain chance to show their talent in front of other, then their confidence level will be increased in order to this, they will become successful sport's person in coming time owing to this platform. Furthermore, these days, people are busy in their hectic schedules so, they need to rejuvenate their mind. Government had better to allocate some investment to improve the sport facilities in every areas. Which is immensely helpful for their lives.
On the other side, I deem that there are many sectors, which need to improvement like education. In another words, education has become integral part of youngster's lives, and there are many childern, who do not have appropriate study related facilities due to poverty. So, chunks of money should be spent by government on this feild. Which is extrmely beneficial for street kids. Apart from this, global warming is increasing with each passing day. Hence, government should spend the bulk of momey on public transport to reduce the level of polluation. However, poor people easily use this transport of mode, and save their money.
To sum up, although health and sport's facilities but I think that other sectors also need to improvements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... equal important to lead a better life. While the argument is that goverenment spend ...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...er to this, they will become successful sports person in coming time owing to this pla...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, apart from, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60268288039 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584126984127 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1559863638 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161421019077 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463480940258 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438811110506 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969008116388 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520696983849 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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