The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The speaker asserts that the appropriate way for any society for preparing leadership in its young people in any fields of their interest is by instilling in them a spirit of co-operation rather than competition. I completely agree with the speaker assertion as the best leadership can be a actual outcome of we-feeling rather than unhealthy competition.
Consider , for instance, the early childhood where we spent must of our time in school. In school, there must be a strong corelation among teacher and students as well as among students. Unless mutual sympathy exists, the overall purpose of real learning is impossible. When some of the quandary arises during learning course , one can easily search for solution of such problem by instilling help from teacher or peers. If the student develop sense of competition without bringing sense of co-operation in such problems, the problem remain entrenched with no solution, rather brings resentment and hatred to oneself. With spirit of co-operation, the problems can be easily solved . The feeling of camaraderie between students brings them proper sense of veneration on one another, and develop sanguine thought on them, which ultimately lead them to a responsible citizenry and act as a strong catalyst for tommorow's would-be leader .
Likewise, in any bussiness field, the sense of cooperation is utmost. Suppose, someone is eastablilishing an Flower nursery in particular area and his ambition is to market them to large number of consumer, then he/she must understand the complete marketing scenario and the channels for proper marketing. For this, the sense of cooperation is very crucial. The owner should eastablished amenable spirit with whole-seller, retailer, middle-man, and finally consumer. If there is spirit of we among all these channel , then , only the objective is well met. Leadership is automatically reflected from the person's behaviour if he can bring sense of cooperation among all the field.
Nevertheless, many people might argue that in any fields either politics, busssiness ,or academic , the sense of competition had brought the person in an impressionable position. Admittedly, it may be true in short-term, but in long-term when we develop such feeling of competition, we are harboring resentment, hatred and ill- will on ourselves toward our competitor . And , actually in any field our competitior are our client , therefore, they should be convinced by our motives through cooperation rather than through competition.
In sum, the author's assertation hold true for the reason that today's children who are considered as the future of nation should be raised with sense of camarederie, we-feeling and sprit of co-operation rather than competition that brings hatred , resentment and ill-will among the competitors.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 66
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, in particular, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47926267281 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06762891797 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546082949309 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0613622437 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.157894737 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8421052632 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260896877351 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777270011197 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972290775614 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151989547839 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110789742956 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.