Children future is closely tied to upbringing them in their childhood. Accordingly, it is essential for parents to attend a child-rearing instructional class to bring their adolescent up. Totally in my opinion, in the modern world parents should learn more about in well training children.
Above all, attending parents in child-raising classes could spark off intimacy between them. Apparently, parents always concern about their children outside home activities, like who they are meeting, playing or where they are going with their friends so that parents need to know how to communicate and talk with them in order to create a friendly relationship and understanding their feelings.
Apart from building a close relationship with children, these people, especially the younger ones should learn how to behave with newborn babies. For example, a young mother without any experience in handling a little baby can use the information and practical knowledge from other parents and professionals instructor to raise a baby.
Although instructing class could lead parents to change their old thought about parenting, others believe that we can not use the same method or information for all children. Obviously, each child has different behavior and needs’ special attention from a parent, mother or father of children with Hyperactivity could not act the same way that the other use for teaching their kids to how well behaved in society.
In conclusion, in point of my view, proper upbringing children have played a very important role in their future and parents could more effective when they know how to raise them physically and rationally sound.
- Some people argue that competitive sports are good for bringing together different people and cultures. Others argue that these sports can cause problems and increase conflicts between nations. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. 67
- It is necessary to parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do u agree or disagree? 61
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 89
- modern technology is changing our world .This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication. it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures. To what extent agree or disagree 73
- modern technology is changing our world .This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication. it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures. To what extent agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, if, so, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41762452107 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87278150287 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.908583164 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29118536832 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129576446176 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657747597393 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175315184004 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942240210975 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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