The Science has always been complex to humans, various discoveries and continious evolution in this field has always amazed us. From solving the problems to inventing new things, science is everywhere. No doubt, that the people now could see and understand our complex world more closely ,but also science has given us so many minute details about our complex world that It has become very hard for one to understand the world completly.
With the rise in modern tools humans are able to solve much more complex problems that one could have never imagined. The perception is much more clear and procurment of information is easy with the help of modern tools that are available to us. Researchers and scholars are now able to gather data from the internet quick and could comminicate with their other counterparts and could easily work together even when they are far apart from each other. However, with the advancement in technology complexity of the problem has been increased and humans are now capable of solving much more complex issue like recently, MIT scholar took in her research took the picture of a black hole, which was once beyond human's imagination due to it's seemingly large size and hence we can say that scientific discoveries have given us much more better understanding of our world and have also provided us opportunities to work on much more complex problems.
However, once there was a time when life was simple and peaceful , people us to think that earth is flat and all planets revolves around earth.But when you will look back and think about this statement, you might laugh on such statements. Scientific discoveries have unraveled many complex pictures to us and have presented facts and logics to consider. Scientific discoveries are getting much more complex because of numerous rules that have been devloped and It has become quite hard for one to follow such complex rules, facts and protocols to evaluate the simple things about our world for example :
If I would ask you a simple question that why the color of sky is blue ? you would simply state that because of Sun light but deep down the answer is more complex, It is due to the scattering of the sun light with earth's atmospheric gases and other elements and turns the color of sun light into blue. Due to complex rules deducted after numerous Scientific discoveries, world around us might feel complex to some people.
However, The author has mentioned two opinions about Scientific discoveries, That is , some thinks discoveries have made easy to understand this world and other thinks they have made it more complex.However, I personally think that these discoveries have made us to think and see clear about world because many of the discoveries have solved complex situations which were mystic to humans. If one would critically think about details, discoveries have made things much clear and have made easy to understand and discover further.
In conclusion , Scientific discoveries has been a great source for our understanding about the world around us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2575.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 510.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6087579174 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450980392157 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.897558237 60.3974514979 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.666666667 118.986275619 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 23.4991977007 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40977660606 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155726326912 0.0831039109588 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940333142065 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236976181814 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488127161816 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.1392134831 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.