Modern technology, such as personal computers and the internet have made it possible to do their work from home at least part of the time, instead of going to an office everyday. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this.
In recent times technology has made advancements to an extent that people can do most of the work, shopping from home. People are saving much time utilizing scientific miracles. There are many advantages and drawbacks which we will discuss in this essay.
On the one hand, technology developments have made it easier for many people to save time and money by working from home. For an instance, if a person is saving two hours by avoiding commuting to and from office. Staff can spend adequate time with their loved ones. Furthermore, this will prevent the hassle of traveling and will permit to efficiently use leisure in hobbies and to meet friends. Saving time is a major element for the people who opt to work from home, however, this has few drawbacks.
On the other hand, remote work seems to be ineffective for many. A survey done by Business Times, have reported that remote work has less productivity than in office work. The reason being people cannot use time efficiently because of numerous distractions. Where many professionals working from home tend to stay far from office to enjoy a peaceful environment and to get away from city lights, have difficulty to travel for an urgent meeting. Furthermore bonding with peers becomes difficult as they rarely meet.
To summarize, despite many advantages that technology brought us, effective use of computes and internet will bring us fruitful results. Many have expressed an option of setting up a mini-office at home might dilute the negative side of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 446, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...iculty to travel for an urgent meeting. Furthermore bonding with peers becomes difficult as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03937007874 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65801686039 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2478547584 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293933162589 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927402542216 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613159930059 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178897027459 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222097722822 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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