As we know, education brings many benefits to people. However, as to whether it is appropriate for the government to pay for students' tuition fees, there arises a heated debate among people. From the point where I stand, I believe the merits prevail over its downsides.
There are clear advantages for the state to fund education. To begin with, schooling is important to a country's long-term development, by offering free education students would have equal access to knowledge, which helps them acquire professional skills to reach their potential and realize their life value, as a result, these people can make a contribution to the society's progress. Furthermore, for those who come from disadvantaged backgrounds, attending schools free of charge gives them an opportunity to learn something that they can utilize to get rid of poverty and they are less likely to commit crimes to make a living, thus helping with social stability.
On the other hand, governments paying for schooling costs may have some potential downsides. the first problem is that it will pose a financial burden on the authority. Since the government has very limited funds which have to be appropriately allocated to each field. Then the other infrastructures would be underfunded if schools cost too much money. For example, citizens may experience bad traffic conditions if the roads cannot get upgraded, and people may suffer from health problems when the community has no budget to build parks and gardens for them to exercise. In addition, some students may take it for granted and do not cherish the opportunity to study if they do not have to pay for education.
In conclusion, taking both sides of free education into consideration, it seems to me that free education can benefit a country in the long term, while the government should be careful to allocate its budget.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...rings many benefits to people. However, as to whether it is appropriate for the government to...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...osts may have some potential downsides. the first problem is that it will pose a fi...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se a financial burden on the authority. Since the government has very limited funds w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10784313725 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85591935533 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.9763628812 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229519330234 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751597028292 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532736105908 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136418314615 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486077392238 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.