There are some problems in the changing room in your sport center. Write a letter to the sport center manager.
In your letter, you should:
• describe the problems in the changing room
• explain why the sport center is important for you
• suggest what the manager should do.
Dir Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to suggest that your sport center should be repaired something in the changing room.
I always go to your sport center every days. I do yoga and run on the machine, which make me stronger. Moreover I am not only do exercise but also listen music and eat some meals there, that makes me feel relaxed, comfortable, and do wonder for my health and people.
However, I am really sad, because your changing room is very dirty, I think it is not be clean for long time. especially, because water cannot exit then it over on the floor, the room very unclean, that makes people uncomfortable.
I recommend that the manager should be repair all of them and make clean every three hours, which make the changing will be clean and comfortable for everyone.
I thank you for your consideration and I hope your sport center will more develop in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Loc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ays go to your sport center every days. I do yoga and run on the machine, which m...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...on the machine, which make me stronger. Moreover I am not only do exercise but also list...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 35, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
... However, I am really sad, because your changing room is very dirty, I think it...
^^^^
Line 13, column 87, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...g room is very dirty, I think it is not be clean for long time. especially, becaus...
^^
Line 13, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Especially
...think it is not be clean for long time. especially, because water cannot exit then it over...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 40, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'repaired'?
Suggestion: repaired
... I recommend that the manager should be repair all of them and make clean every three ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, really, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 26.3917525773 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7743902439 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45811885485 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0035459655 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338804655201 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147530931362 0.0766984524023 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136043357086 0.0603063233224 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212729324617 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152927116825 0.0580467560999 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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