Your friend wrote a letter to you asking advice on their parents visiting
your area. Write a letter to your friend.
- Suggest the places they can visit
- recommend a place where they can stay
- offer something you can do with them.
Dear SHM,
I have received your letter that your parents are coming to Indore this weekend. I am very happy and exited to meet them. as they will stay here for a week they would have plenty of time to visit our nearby temples and markets.
as they are coming on friday night , they can visit to the lord Shani temple on the Saturday morning. On Sunday they can visit to the local market of Indore like Rajwada which is quite famous for clothes and sweets. On Monday they can also visit to Mahankal temple and near by places in Ujjain city which is only 50 Km away from Indore.
For their lodging i have booked Sayaji hotel, it is few kilometers away from my home. it is near to the shopping mall.
it will be pleasure for me if they will stay with us for few days at our home instead of hotel. my wife and me would be happy to get together with them. if possible i will help them in shopping and visit to the local markets also.
Thanks
XYD
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear SHM, I have received your letter that your pa...
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Suggestion: As
... am very happy and exited to meet them. as they will stay here for a week they wou...
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...o visit our nearby temples and markets. as they are coming on friday night , the...
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... our nearby temples and markets. as they are coming on friday night , they ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as they are coming on friday night , they can visit to the lord Shani temple...
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Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...y can also visit to Mahankal temple and near by places in Ujjain city which is only 50 ...
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...it is few kilometers away from my home. it is near to the shopping mall. it w...
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... few days at our home instead of hotel. my wife and me would be happy to get toget...
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Line 15, column 226, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...shopping and visit to the local markets also. Thanks XYD
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25683060109 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.87461401194 2.54303337028 74% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.174936155 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8181818182 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271488702372 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864555859952 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069836395014 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144791476822 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947407276377 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.