You are going to leave your apartment in an English speaking country and your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during stay. Meanwhile, your friend wants to rent the flat after you.
• Write a letter to your landlord and Let your landlord know about your leaving
• Thank you landlord for his/her help
• Tell him/her about your friend
Dear Mrs. Ann Lee,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be leaving Singapore next month and going back to India. I have completed my management course, which was for a year, and now need to head back to my office. My company encouraged me to take up the course as I was due for a promotion. I had to sign a bond that on completion of my studies, I will return and display my newly acquired skills through my work.
First and foremost, before leaving, I want to tell you that I genuinely enjoyed my time at the apartment. Thank you for catering to all my needs and I appreciate the efforts you have taken to make my stay comfortable. Secondly, I will never forget the time you got me homemade chicken soup, for I had caught the flu and was down with high fever. You were strict about my diet yet you lovingly nursed me back to health.
Finally, I know you are very skeptical on keeping tenants because you stay alone and worry about your safety. However, my friend has also enrolled herself for the same course. She would like to live in your apartment since I have spoken highly about your hospitality. She is about the same age as me and does not have any bad habits. I am sure you will enjoy her company.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, look, second, secondly, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35245901639 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36020032037 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7928065399 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227879662958 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785032759552 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851237531113 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113228451639 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100233235615 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.