You are going to leave your apartment in an English speaking country and your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during stay. Meanwhile, your friend wants to rent the flat after you.
• Write a letter to your landlord and Let your landlord know about your leaving
• Thank you landlord for his/her help
• Tell him/her about your friend
Dear Sir,
I am Mathel Jane your tenant in 13- B apartment. I am very sad to inform you that my education is going to complete with this month and I planned to move back to Canada my country. Your immense help and assistance in various issues helped for smooth running of my education. I always felt your presence as secured and safe. Your family members were also very sweet to me and treated me like one of your children.
thank you for all your support and renting me your house at such minimum price. I shared my views about you and your kind nature with my friend William who is also very impressed. he wants to join as tenant to this house and want to discuss with you about same. I am sure you equally like him as he is also a very nice person. Currently he is staying in a hostel which is very far from his work place. With your permission I share your contact details and timing to discuss further issues. Once again I thank you for making me very comfortable with your kindly nature.
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| 2019-11-16 | coolchris2100 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am Mathel Jane your tenant in 13- B apartme...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thank
...ated me like one of your children. thank you for all your support and renting me...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...end William who is also very impressed. he wants to join as tenant to this house a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31216931217 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17891795062 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.9283438572 44.8134815571 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.9166666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393573773744 0.216113520407 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154092101857 0.0766984524023 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689589925073 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321842101129 0.12726935374 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393497841155 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.