Some believe the more comforts a society provides, the more likely it is to create people who
cannot provide for themselves. Others believe such comforts are indicative of a society’s self-sufficiency.
Societal comforts are benefits that the citizens enjoy after having a stable economic structure and a optimistic attitude of people. The comforts, which may include quality food, sophisticated technology and also reliable energy and resources, allows a particular society to develop a sense of assurance for living. Realistically, a society that is able to provide comforts to its people, will be an independent society as a whole. However, I believe to a certain extent that some individuals in the society may move away from this particular independence.
Comforts in society can often be overstated as "luxuries". People who enjoy such luxuries are certainly satisfied with their current position. This leads on to some people to be simply happy with what they have, and not having any profound ambition moving forwards. The lack of ambition is the mark of a lack of independence, as a person may begin to lose his/her motivation first followed by his/her productivity. Hypothetically and psychologically, this would be the case for some us, and it can be further proven when we consider Maslow's Need Heirarchy. Once the basic needs to the recognition is achieved, self-actualization is the final product. But what's after that? It hasn't been discussed. The languid nature of people is apparent looking when we look at the poor boroughs in the England. The magnanimous government; compared to third-world countries; will provide healthcare and housing to these individuals that are poor. However, this leads to those miserly citizens to rely on the government solely and in some cases, even criticizing their benefactors for not supporting them enough. As such, some of these citizens are not able to find employment due to their lack of ambition.
A well-off society is certainly more comfortable to live in when compared to a third-world country. With the existing benefits such as clean water for example, some people take these benefits for granted. In rural Faisalabad in Pakistan, people still have to walk for miles to obtain clean drinking water. This persistence for a simple daily activity, leads to a more productive mindset as a person in Pakistan knows that he "must" do it as no one will do it for him. In Western countries, this norm of hard-work is not built-in in most cases. By introducing more comforts such as Uber Delivery, people would rely on technology and as such there will always be a tendency to rely on something else when the comforts become extravagant.
Certainly, the comforts a society provides will benefits the nation completely. In terms of economy, education and personal development, comforts can allow an individual to be more than he would be in the absence. In part, this is reliance towards comforts, but they will allow this individual to reach his prime position. Moreover, as a person develops with comforts such as literary resources for example, his mind as well as personality sharpens. Additionally, through comforts, people can choose to go on voluntary programs abroad to see how different the effect of comforts is in third-world countries comparing to western countries. This experience, through comfort, can develop a sense of responsibility which further develops a sense of independence to firstly provide for oneself and, if optimistic, provide for others as well.
In conclusion, although the societal comforts will develop the economy as a whole surely, there will be some people that will lose their ambition and their productivity along the way. Independence is important in this day and age due to the rapidly changing climate. To be able to support oneself is an important part of independence and if a society relies too much on the comforts, the chance for personal development is minute.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, third, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3186.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 611.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21440261866 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97176167858 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10436624719 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479541734861 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1013.4 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0671137866 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.774193548 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7096774194 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22580645161 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30160102537 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076402674503 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643557937429 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181625660389 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616551374273 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 160.0 100.480337079 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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