percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart here displays the proportion of the Australian male and female in various age groups who performed physical activity daily in 2010.
Overall, the boys aged between (15 to 24) overperformed the girls by a little margin. However, the women managed to dominate in rest all the age groups from (25-64). Finally, the elderly masses of both the gender almost equally did the exercise.
The Australian males outperformed females of the age group(15 to 24) by 5%. However, the gents performance is declined by 5% in the next age group (25-34). From the age (35 to 64) there is a constant increase in the performance of the ladies.
The senior citizens, however, managed to do the exercises almost equally by both the genders. The highest performance is shown by the females of age group(45 to 54) is 53.3%. While the lowest performance is by the males of age group(35 to 44).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gents'' or 'gent's'?
Suggestion: gents'; gent's
...e age group15 to 24 by 5%. However, the gents performance is declined by 5% in the ne...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t age group 25-34. From the age 35 to 64 there is a constant increase in the perf...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... females of age group45 to 54 is 53.3%. While the lowest performance is by the males ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77124183007 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67479218285 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.934182573 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249992599174 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935208592843 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829145197739 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16353698852 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928777527671 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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