In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why?
In this burgeoning epoch of science and technology, a contemporary human dwells in a world which is shaped by the latest trends and approaches coming across the globe points for years. The opponents and proponents have their own perceptual intellection to support their ideas. Before deducing a fair conclusion, I am going to shed some light on both the aspects in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, many people say that computers change the way people live work and relax and the biggest advantage of using computers is that it has got a very large memory to store every bit of data known to humans. Moreover, computers do not make mistakes nor do they get tired and because of computers, people can make other machines even better. Thirdly, computers are being used in aeroplanes and ships to control and regulate their systems with the need for human beings.
Apart from that, people are using computers in medical fields to develop medicines to diagnose dangerous diseases so people can live even longer. In addition to it, children can use computers for their school projects. last but not least, Individuals can play games on computers in their free time to relax their mind or they can do chatting with their friends on social networking sites with the help of computers.
To perorate, after having a lot of thoughts and deliberations with myself on this topic, I inclined to state that yes computers are the greatest invention of all time because they reduce time consumption on daily activities, people can save the information and edit it anytime, and they let you do almost everything you need. Computers have become the most powerful tool ever created by the human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, third, thirdly, well, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97202797203 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59614854842 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1340255207 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0812539150134 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301933554211 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249695265177 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503469159646 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219250019541 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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