Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Over time alternative methods have been developed to substitute human effort. This has resulted in a convenient lifestyle. Thing change has both upsides and downsides. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
To start with, advantages of the use of machines in the household. Several machineries in the house like washing machine, refrigerator, dishwashers and vacuüm cleaner, etc. have eradicated the burden of everyday chores. Back in the day, when these machines didn’t exist, these mundane chores took up majority of the day and leaves the person tired which resulted in leaving no energy for the other important things one might have planned for the day. But after the invention of these machines the tasks which took longer hours can be done within minutes hence, saving time. Concluding, these machines have made life much easier and save a lot of our time.
On the other hand, these machines have made us lazy and inhabited the practice of procrastination in us. These machines have made us dependent on them hence making us helpless without them. We lack the skills to perform tasks without these machines. For example some people cannot wash clothes without accessing washing machines. Also, these machines use electricity which is not cheap. This has led to higher electricity bills and more usage of electricity resulting in higher expenditure of a household.
To sum up, we are dependent of these machines as they have made our lives easier and have offered a luxurious lifestyle. At the same time, we have become handicapped without these machines. Although the situations in which we are without any machines around us are very rare. The pros of the machines outweigh the cons and benefit us endlessly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ome handicapped without these machines. Although the situations in which we are without ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, in my opinion, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19718309859 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72358415196 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9564953255 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972889956886 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333154589484 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032930775798 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627109240006 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307120586175 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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