Describe a game or sport you enjoy playing.
You should say:
What kind of sport it is
Who you play it with
Where you play it
and explain why you enjoy playing it
I would like to tell you about a sport I enjoy playing. That’s walking in the park. This sport is good for my health. Walking for 30 minutes a day or more on most days of the week is a great way to improve or keep up your overall health. The aim of walking is to do exercises, keep fit, reduced risk of heart disease and stroke, improved management of conditions such as high blood pressure, high cholesterol, diabetes and preserve and enhance my memory.
I leave my office for walking by 5 PM, then I go to the park near my house and start walking. This park is very large and full of the trees, so the fresh air is very healthy for health. Actually, none of my friends live near my house, so I often do walks alone. However, I enjoy it so much because I can listen to the sound of the birds and breathe the fresh air.
The park have many trees, so the air and environment remain fresher than other places. So breathing the fresh air, doing the exercises and finally walking to keep fit is definitely a very healthy habit. A sound mind lies on a sound body and this habit that I adopted is pretty helpful for keeping a sound health and sound mind. Besides, walking alone is the best relaxing time to me after a tired working day, I think and come up with the create ideas in this time.
Actually, I am not keen on doing exercise. However, after delivering the baby, I gained weight so much. Up to now, I have not still lost any weights. After the recent annual check-up, a doctor advice me to do exercise, so I started walking after working time, and I really love this physical activity. Doing the physical exercise is the habit I have developed to keep the physical and mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... and breathe the fresh air. The park have many trees, so the air and environment ...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d working day, I think and come up with the create ideas in this time. Actually, I am n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, finally, however, really, so, still, then, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 319.0 196.424390244 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34482758621 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32251381479 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 106.607317073 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539184952978 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8050080824 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0473504275109 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244055036546 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777739402024 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.032112819575 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047170977343 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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