A friend you made while youe were studing abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
- say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
- explain how to apply for a job
I had my computer fixed at your computer battery store; however, unfortunately, it is not working properly. The battery runs out fast and that was the basic problem.
Moreover, when I went back to your store, I was surprised that the supervisor refused to pay any attention to the problem and It is unacceptable and harms the company repetition. The other serious problem is that this device contains all my lectures and notes and i use it daily in my work plus I do not have an alternative.
I expect to hear from you very soon. Please, give this matter your immediate attention.
yours faithfully
Ahmed
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-19 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 56 | view |
| 2019-08-29 | Android | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... contains all my lectures and notes and i use it daily in my work plus I do not h...
^
Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e this matter your immediate attention. yours faithfully Ahmed
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...is matter your immediate attention. yours faithfully Ahmed
^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mmediate attention. yours faithfully Ahmed
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 26.3917525773 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 517.0 937.175257732 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 206.0 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87735849057 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 3.78020617076 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76619474959 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 127.690721649 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688679245283 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 162.0 290.88556701 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4343828918 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8571428571 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127406807994 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064699196816 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432727006076 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795888646331 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457779139462 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.