TPO - 16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Some people like to travel alone while other people prefer to join a group with a tour guide. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that going on a trip is best when you go with a group and a tour guide. I feel this way for many reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, travelling with a group is safer. Some places in foreign countries are dangerous with high crime rates. Thus, moving with a well-informed person who has a lot of information about our destination would guarantee that we avoid bad and sketchy areas. In addition, every individual in the group could contribute something they know about the country or the region we are visiting. Therefore, the group as a whole would have more knowledge which would help to take the right decisions. My own experience is a compelling example on what I mean. I used to go on trips with my family when I was young. We travelled in a large group with a guide most of the time. I realized that travelling together with other people allowed us to be safer since some individuals could share their knowledge about the place or even sometimes the directions since this was before the widespread use of the GPS and smartphones. Other group members had unique skills. To illustrate, I remember when our bus once broke down in the middle of the road but some people in the group volunteered to fix it.
Secondly, travelling in a group is more affordable than travelling on your own. In other words, paying for transportation, hotel stay, food and other necessities separately could be far more expensive than getting a complete package from a company. This is mainly due to the fact that companies that organize these vacation offers are able to spread the cost over a large number of people and are also able to negotiate lower prices as they get the services in bulk.
To conclude, travelling by oneself could provide little extra freedom to wonder around. However, this does not outweigh the benefits of group travel such as being less expensive, safer, more informative and more fun since you meet new people on the trip.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 365, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...offers are able to spread the cost over a large number of people and are also able to negotiate l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, even so, i feel, i mean, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69623655914 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58704962461 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567204301075 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2637733214 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9473684211 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57894736842 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267278478176 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873009693694 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940616149103 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174200690367 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136645564002 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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