You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek your permission for allowing me to work in the headquarters of the company in America for six months. I would like to further mention the reason behind it in detail.
Since, our company is planning to expand the global reach of the products, getting the opportunity to work in the head office of the organisation will definitely help me to enhance my skills and expertise. Moreover, it will not only allow me to gain knowledge of trade strategies, regulations and tariffs but also products’ global market trends deeply. Thus, I will be able to work with full potential not only building a successful career, but also generating long term profits and sustainable growth of the firm.
I have talked to Shweta, junior sales manager and she has agreed to take on my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore, I shall check my emails and if the need be, I shall be available for emergency calls. Once I get back to work, I would endeavour to work extra hours to catch up on anything I missed.
I would need your support to get all the necessary approvals, email confirmation, and other necessary documentations required for working in the corporate office. Further if you could assist me to make arrangements for travel and accommodations. Kindly guide me on the reimbursement policy of flights and hotels of the organisation.
I hope you will consider me suitable for working in the company’s head office. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98841698842 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06365729719 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7858711564 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298821846382 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927676967316 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819972954844 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16986555105 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074011952237 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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