Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
ideas are powerful. If we go through the pages of history, we can see how the simplest of ideas have impacted humanity. ideas, which at the time were criticized and laughed at, have completely changed the way we live in this world.
Everybody at a certain point in time, has an idea that can potentially change the world. but we all tend to ignore them, dismissing them as being silly or maybe because of fear of being ridiculed by the society. but history has been witness to the fact that those who stood by their ideas, the ones that they truly believed in, have left a permanent mark in history. For instance, when Copernicus had the idea that it was indeed the earth that was revolving around the Sun and not vice versa, it shook the foundation of belief at that time. he was not only criticized and laughed at, but he was also burnt alive by the church. however, since he saw through his idea, we still remember him as one of the greatest scientists that ever lived, even after centuries.
when gandhi thought that only non-violence could bring freedom to India, most people did not believe him. In a world that was bent only by violence, it was hard to believe that mere protests and marches could get the British to give independence to one of their most valued colonies. however, gandhi stuck to his non-violent methods and the rest is history.
The fact that one has an idea and they see through it does not guarantee that they will leave a long-lasting legacy. however, with the above examples, I do believe that people who follow their thoughts to see through their vision has left an everlasting legacy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6275862069 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38186769112 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4923777156 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235032473421 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760600162931 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730567412858 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145511506182 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106265912786 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.