Eating too much sugar is harmful to our health. Some people think that it is the government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Obesity encourages an array of health difficulties. Having ample amount of sugar is responsible for high blood sugar level in blood. There is a controversy, according to few folks government must take initiative to limit sugar consumption. In other hand, rest of them are saying that only individual can control their own sugar level from their daily routine. This essay will discuss and provide supportive points for both standpoints.
In my opinion, government body take steps in order to sale food items containing less sugar. Firstly, there must be a strict rule and legal notice for entire food industry. Tasters will be the responsible person who can decide and provide report keeping in mind the fact. As an example, Coca-Cola company should take this issues in a very serious way to reduce sugar quantity. They have introduced diet coke which contains less sugar than regular soft drinks. Secondly, ice-cream, pastries & chocolate industry need to recheck sugar level of every food item. Therefore, it is required to research and reproduce new products. For instance, just like egg-less pastries are nowadays available in market, it is expected to come up with new ideas to limit sweetness level. Thirdly, advertisement of awareness through social media will be the best part to encourage one to step forward for having better version of life. In short, small changes are indication of healthy living.
But, along with government, individuals are also equally responsible to check their food habit to get rid of health issues related to sweet consumption. Daily exercise and proper meal timing keep a person fit. In short together we can make difference.
In conclusion, to maintain the limitation of sugar consumption, both government and folk must move forward to build the new way of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'folks'' or 'folk's'?
Suggestion: folks'; folk's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23630136986 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70162335799 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650684931507 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6677219194 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4736842105 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233227111737 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642621092415 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621391649005 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149795702578 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695921689613 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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