Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet in our daily activities.
Moving towards the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about how the Internet affects our routine days. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that the Internet has a great contribution to our contemporary life. However, others argue convincingly that using the Internet brings several drawbacks to our living. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main points for people to defend the former argument that the Internet has positive impacts on our lifestyles. It is a well-documented fact that the Internet brings people nearer than in the past. The most obvious example to prove is that a Vietnamese student being abroad to study can easily reach out to his family via video call or chat by Facebook. Furthermore, there is no doubt that the Internet helps people to search and access information. worldwide. For instance, a number of scientists, lecturers, students in Vietnam are able to buy information related to their field by using the Internet to log in accounter situated in the US.
On the other hand, there are two primary pieces of evidence for people to support the latter argument that the Internet affects our modern life in negative ways. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that the Internet has a lot of information, whereas these are not guaranteed by governments or organizations. A clear example to prove is that there are over 1300 newspapers in Vietnam however, just almost 300 newspapers among that number can believe. Equally important, there is no denying that people lost their personal information on the Internet. This is supported by the fact that there are approximately 100000 robbers who take personal information to sell for money.
All things considered, it is my strong belief that the vital role of the Internet in our daily life. Accordingly, I strongly recommend the governments should enhance people's awareness in terms of how to use the Internet effectively. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generations will be ensured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Worldwide
...eople to search and access information. worldwide. For instance, a number of scientists, ...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to log in accounter situated in the US. On the other hand, there are two primary...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...wspapers among that number can believe. Equally important, there is no denying that peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in fact, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15254237288 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89421772117 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556497175141 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6291980137 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.294117647 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219328469909 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747088302687 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561269906087 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146970226829 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438647403295 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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