Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet in our daily activities.
Moving towards the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about the role of the Internet in our life. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that the Internet has an important role in our contemporary life. However, others argue convincingly that the Internet affects some negative things for people. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main points for people to defend the former argument the Internet brings a number of advantages to modern lifestyles. First of all, it is a well- documented fact that the Internet helps all the people worldwide to reach out to education easier than in the past. The most obvious example to prove is that a student in Vietnam can learn at a school or a university in the US by E-learning. Furthermore, there is no doubt that the Internet brings people are nearer, and the distance does not matter now. For instance, we can talk with a foreigner by video call on an application, such as Facebook. We can make friends with a person lives in other countries.
On the other hand, there are two primary evidences for other people to support the latter argument the Internet has negative impacts on our life. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that the Internet has a lot of information, these are not guaranteed by the government or an organization. A clear example being found to prove is that we can see that there are over 1300 newspapers in Vietnam, but just 300 newspapers among that number we can believe in my country. Equally important, there is no denying that people lose their information on the Internet. This is supported by the fact that there are about 100000 robbers who take the personal information of others to sell for money in Vietnam.
All things are considered, it is my strong belief that the Internet is so important in our daily activities. Accordingly, I strongly recommend the government should enhance people’s awareness in terms of the role of the Internet. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generations will be ensured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91420911528 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81836644426 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520107238606 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9420961176 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176581959835 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578641309172 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06159399582 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116622308467 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049770892128 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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