Write an essay comparing or contrasting two pets.
If you are a person who love pet, you will not ignore two lovely pets: dog and cat. They are two popular animals and quite friendly with us. However, they also share some prominent distinct points.
The first different between dog and cat is an appearance. Dog's body is quite sturdy and strong, which reason explain for the question why they are always hyperactive running. Obviously, dog cannot be locked alone inside the house all day. Dogs do not like being home alone and it will feel an excited when their owners come back. Unlike the dog, the cat’s body is soft, silky fur. They love relaxing on the sofa to sleep instead of running outside. Cats enjoy alone time and still happy if their owners absent.
In addition, character is one of points which distinguish pet dogs and cats. Dogs enjoy being part of their owner’s life. They also like playing with their owners, which catch some objects. Dogs need a lot of attention from their owners, so you have to spend more time taking care of them. In contrast, cats are independent so they do not take as much time of their owners and cats even do not need let outside of taken a walk. They will be fine if you busy and have to go to work for a long time.
Last but not least, diet of dogs and cats is not the same. Dogs eat a lot and they will eat wholly food that you give them. Moreover, because of hyperactivity, their body is usually made dirty; you have to help them to wash. Otherwise, cats eat less than dog, they are really picky animals and they only eat fish, another foods. They can able to groom themselves so they not have to the bathed on regular.
In conclusion, as mentioned above, there are some major distinct points between pet dogs and cats. Each of them has its own attractive features. Although different in many ways, they are still loved by everyone because in a dorm o of their cuteness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...love pet, you will not ignore two lovely pets: dog and cat. They are two popular ...
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Message: Did you mean 'to let'?
Suggestion: to let
... their owners and cats even do not need let outside of taken a walk. They will be f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48837209302 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18407993866 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3047071425 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.3333333333 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0454186149071 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0144743171627 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029851946122 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0320440495738 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039162785331 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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