Many people believe that a member of a family is more important than a friend. Do you agree or disagree. Include your own examples of experience and opinion.
Family and friends both play essential role in life. Most individuals reckon that family members are important rather than friends. I completely agree with this statement and I will discuss this in my coming crumb of writing and then give my opinion.
To begin with, there are multifarious reasons that why I agree with this statement. Firstly, friends may come and go, but family stays forever with us. Family members are there in our life longer than friends we make and they accepted us as we are. Besides this, family members care about us , support us and always want best for us. Also, they are our blood and heritage. They are along with us in our good and bad time. For example, if we are in any problem then our family help us to solve the trouble whereas in case of friends, sometimes they left us and instead of help they mock at us.
Furthermore, another reason is that our family members help us with financial aid. If we ask them for money they will help us with what they are able to do for us. They are very helpful to achieve success in life. Also, family members give motivation when we are in depression. In addition, the fact that if someone in the family is in pain , the whole family members are there to share the pain and feelings is also logical. Therefore, family members are beneficial for everyone.
In conclusion, it seems to me that family plays crucial role in everyone's life. It is better to have a good understanding among family members. They are very helpful for each other and solve to hardships of another member of family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sides this, family members care about us , support us and always want best for us....
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...that if someone in the family is in pain , the whole family members are there to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58007117438 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34086605449 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508896797153 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7060271284 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7368421053 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7894736842 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152131732537 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06172667842 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471485470466 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112958947905 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419599534822 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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