In this era of modern technology, environment pollution is one of the most controversial issues in the world. in that case several people asserted that, authorities should preserve environment. other believes that, every citizen can pay a major role toward saving environment.
To begin with, there are lot of factors why people claim government should take necessary steps for preventing environment pollution. in general word authority have legal powers to stand against the rule’s breaker, which can be helpful for saving environment. like when factories are emitted carbon dry oxide more than legal limit, then country cannot impose punishment for that. Moreover, government can impose strict rules for stopping using of chemical in farming process. which can be pay an essential role for preventing water pollution. For example, developing country Japan have strict laws for farmers and industrialists for preventing environment.
Furthermore, if government arrange same affordable and alternative transportation for public then they will use instead of private vehicles. Result is less carbon monoxide and nitrogen which is the main contributor of air pollution. For instance, most of the people in Bangladesh using rickshaw for nearly travel.
On the other hand, there is a theory that, government cannot do any development until the nations of the country became aware. If protecting air, water, soil people should use jute bags instead of plastics packet for shopping. To highlight, day by day the use of textile bags increasing tremendously for saving environment. One more point can be added that, people try to use public transport instead of private vehicles. That can pay a vital role for preserving environment. For instance, 60% people in UAE using public train, which is really helpful for environment, source of well-known UAE newspaper ‘Gulf News’.
In conclusion, everything has some positive and negative side. However, in my personal opinion, general citizen and authority should work together for solving any problems like environment pollution.
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- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction .do you agree or disagree? 56
- Fast food is a part of life in some places. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some believe it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment, others think people are responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors. Do you agree or disagree? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65615141956 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93894253026 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570977917981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8756395273 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.65 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191910282812 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643727177026 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347636927952 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109026492455 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256707031096 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.