do you agree that Television is a good influence on children?
Personally, I disagree. I think tv is a good influence on children.
For example, when I was a child, tv had not a lot of programs and I couldn’t see tv a lot. I had to spend my leisure time with other hobbies like playing with my sister and friends. when I spent my days with other children. I could find new friends and learned some new plays. Because of these I like teamwork until now and have good moments in my child age.
when I was a child, I went to a park more than now. I spent more time with my family and we were a closer relation together and had a good time. we went to the zoo, to trips by bus. we saw tv more little than now and we were happier. best of all, we gathered in my grandmother's home with my aunt and uncle's family and I could play with their children.
Also, if people don’t watch tv a lot, they can use their time to learn a new ability like music, sport, and a foreign language. tv waste of time
For those reasons, I think tv is a good influence on children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: When
...ike playing with my sister and friends. when I spent my days with other children. I ...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ike playing with my sister and friends. when I spent my days with other children. I ...
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Suggestion: When
...nd have good moments in my child age. when I was a child, I went to a park more th...
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Suggestion: We
... relation together and had a good time. we went to the zoo, to trips by bus. we sa...
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Suggestion: We
...e. we went to the zoo, to trips by bus. we saw tv more little than now and we were...
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Suggestion: Best
...re little than now and we were happier. best of all, we gathered in my grandmothers ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tv
...e music, sport, and a foreign language. tv waste of time For those reasons, I th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07035175879 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3744662447 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 212.727598566 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 618.680645161 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.51630824373 79% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3769868872 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8571428571 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109795137035 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546910230457 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952911893162 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122620538208 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116842759185 0.0645574589148 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 11.7677419355 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 58.1214874552 157% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.1575268817 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.73 10.9000537634 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 86.8835125448 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 10.247311828 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.