do you agree or disagree with the following statements. It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet.
In today’s modern life, thanks to the technological breakthroughts and cutting-edge innovation in every section of science, things that people need them, has altered dramatically. some people are of the opinion that we can countinue like old days and egnoring such thechnological advanced, while others challenge this idea. I personally, adhere to the view that internet cannot farpart from our scientific life; some how, printed materials are out of date indeed, the problem of accessibility. In the following paragraphes my reasons will be elaborated on in more detail.
To commence with, now a days, we cannot deniy the fact that on-line articles and books are so much update ratter than printed academic stuffs such as books, articles, and magazines. generally speaking, it would be one of the most meriats of interner to keeps thing in the last verson of that. it means most sienticets, for instance, publishe their nowelty ideas and approaches in the vrieties of web sites, reaciving comments and opinions of theis colliges throughout the world. However, what I mentioned above might not be generalized to the whole contects. I resently, have searched for a last results of a experiment, which it was hold in America, nevertheless, it was published in a printed book and it does not available for me.
The second reason why I belive internet is better than other mterials for reaseches is that it is easily accessible by a simple click on the sites and seeking in the numeriance data. In fact, it is very important that in a short time finding matters that each person demand it for academic reaseches. For example, every academic article should be developed by refrences and just as refrences helps others reseachers to undertand better the contecxt of a paper, so do they improve the quality and campbility of the article. To delve more into it, publishers first look at refrences and musure it based on how many papers and articles refrence to that article and than decide about the quality of it and it can be very easy if a reachers just access to the internet.
Drawing upon the reasons that I mentioned above, I belive that its meriets of the using internet overwight its demeriets. Not only does it has the last verson and updats of every thing ranging from games to academic stuffs, but also accessability to it makes our life easier and more practical that the past times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94801980198 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78890324776 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1916188416 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.266666667 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9333333333 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169293667859 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449231883599 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457080243732 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823120883201 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229602012733 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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