If you want to save the future of the planet, we all should drastically change our way of life?
What is your opinion?
Admittedly, there are lots of problems that were caused by human activities. Regrettably, people have become quite selfish and irresponsible, especially, in terms of living in a friendly way to their surroundings. There is an opinion written above "we must get free from our harmful habits in order to protect the planet from certain dangers". I completely agree with the statement and the following paragraphs I will support my opinion with examples.
You could know how people treat the environment when you go out and see the loads of rubbish thrown in some parts of street. It is estimated that the people who tend to throw household waste to streets might have not been aware of outcomes of their acts. As a result, plastic waste that was thrown away with household waste has been threatening to the world by creating large amount of waste which has existed in our oceans.
Furthermore, cutting down trees has been seen as one of the causes that has been leading the environment to detorioration. Trees are very essential living things that clean the air by absorbing deleterious gas, carbon dioxide, and produce the oxygen we breathe. By cutting down a large number of trees people are switching the prosperous places into deserts. As a consequence, global warming is rising and making the world shake. I think we must plant trees rather than deforesting which would be beneficial for everybody.
To sum up, we should keep the earth well to next generations. In my opinion parents also are supposed to bring up their children with respect for the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly way" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...onsible, especially, in terms of living in a friendly way to their surroundings. There is an opin...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... the oxygen we breathe. By cutting down a large number of trees people are switching the prospero...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, well, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00378787879 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78425066538 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5722049588 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108988800401 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031300182647 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029956580231 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620974567179 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255858513685 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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