Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists instead of locals.
Why is this happening?
What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more?
In the modern era, foreign tourists tend to visit historical places and museums more frequently, in contrast to local citizens. This might be attributed to the lack of historical background about the value of these sites among locals. Thereafter, educational curriculums should include a comprehensive knowledge about history of their country that encourage the citizens to visit those valuable sites.
Generally speaking, the main reason why many people did not interesting in visiting local museums and historical spaces is the insufficient education. It is well-known fact that most schools and universities did not give the optimal attention to the history subjects, which in turn discourage students to visit these precious places. Subsequent to that, local people could not know the potential contribution of their ancestors to the civilization, which lead to loss of passion to see their creation.
To overcome these challenges, a higher concern to the history curriculums should be given. In particular, the local municipalities should impose inclusive educational programs to encourage local citizens to visit the historical places. Besides that, these programs must aim to prepare qualified guides to enhance the historical background of the local citizens. If the governments do not establish such programs, new generations may lose their history.
In conclusion, the issue of encouraging local people to visit the historical places will continue to demand our efforts. The lack of historical background may be the primary cause of such problem; thereafter, the local authorities should employ a universal program to tackle the negative repercussions of this issue.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast, in particular, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69960474308 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05794518616 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549407114625 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2076798346 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32077521907 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11744108425 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973531374229 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197215461161 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770901952565 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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