There is no gainsaying that rules are an integral part of the human beings' lives. There are numerous controversial arguments about the qaultiy of the rules. In this respect, Some poeple believe that today rules are too strict for young people while some others holds opposie view. From my perspective, young people should obey and follow these rules precisely. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate my points of view.
First exquiste point to be mentioned is that rules are stem from the human experiences, knowledge and wisdom. In this respect, there is no doubt that the authoritives consider all sapects of the rules and they impose rules which are practical and sutitable. As a result, young people should not boject these rules unless they have some reasonable reason. For instance, in my country teenagere are not able to use buses, plans, trains or other means for moving from one province to another province unless they have a written permition from their parents. In first glance, this is a strict rule for teenager but the parlimant impose this rule a few years ago based on some official researchs. Based on thses researchs, this rule put some obstacle on the way of teenagers for fleeing from the house. It is undeniable that teenagers are emothional and some of them escape from house because of some neglegible discrapncy wiht their parents. Therefore, some rules migt seem strict but they advocate young people in long run.
Second point that comes to my mind is that some young people are naive and they are cannot comprehend the rules's goals. For instance, there is a specific rule in my country that people who should be twenty five years old to be capable to establish their own company. Most young poeple like me belived that this rule is unfair and it hinder the young people flourishing. Once, I asked one of our professor who taught law about this rule and she pointed out that this rule is a fair rule. Becuase, in the past time when there was no rule about the young people to establish the company, some people misused young people and establish some companies with young people identification evidence and finally they decieved people by using this company. In result, the government encountered with some teenagers as board members of these companies and government could not verdict these teenagers easily.
Last but not least, it goes without saying that the all rules are not flawless. In turn, young people are capable to object some strict and unfair rules and compel authorities to amend these rules. For instnace, there was a rule that did not permit young people could not drive until they became 22 years old. Young people objected to this rule and asked authorities to alter this limitation to 18 years old like most of the other countries all around the world.
In conclusion, contemplating all aforementioned paragraphs, the rules are not strict today, because these rules are base on the human experiences and they are accordance with the human beings needs. Moreove, the young people are too naive and they cannot understand the rulers' intention for imposing these rules. The rules are amended base on the reasonable proposals, so they can become appropriate.
- TPO-45 Integrated Writing Task 60
- TPO-32 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- T O E F L - T P O 34 85
- TOEFL T P O 32 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO 41 - integrated writing 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'hinders'?
Suggestion: hinders
...belived that this rule is unfair and it hinder the young people flourishing. Once, I a...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...is rule is a fair rule. Becuase, in the past time when there was no rule about the young ...
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Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rulers'' or 'ruler's'?
Suggestion: rulers'; ruler's
...oo naive and they cannot understand the rulers intention for imposing these rules. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2675.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9537037037 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46527251782 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 832.5 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8401649081 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.884615385 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03846153846 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209443903758 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722970719946 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540921301072 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144281882401 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278941359043 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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