some people say that government should spend money on faster public transport. others think that money should be spend on different aspects such as cost reduction and environment conservation. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?
Nowadays, the volume of traffic jam has been growing considerably over the past few years; consequently, the government make some important decisions on this matter such as developing bicycle usage. In this essay, we will discuss why nations invest a large amount of money to facilitate the usage of bicycle and which ways is the best way to solve this issue significantly.
The leaders in some mega cities have invested a huge number of their budget to encourage people in order to riding a bicycle in spite of using vehicles. Undoubtedly, bicycling could play a vital role to cut using of motor vehicles among inhabitants; as a result, the traffic congestion in main streets in the center of city will be increase. In some developed countries like US or Canada, the governor bodies have implemented many facilities such as providing a wide range of bicycle stations around their cities to rent freely or conducting special ways for the persons who would bike to work or other places.
There is effective solution to combat traffic jam better than investing money on the bicycling. Although biking is most efficient way to deal with traffic issue, developing the public transport could be more useful that other methods, because of this matter that not all people can ride a bike either their age or disability. Moreover, in some roads or streets build the special ways to protect the persons who use bicycle from accident by car is the main reason to increase heavy traffic. For instance, the streets of city center in some developing cities are not appropriate for vehicles and bicycles due to lacking of constructor.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, as a result, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93581081081 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66113087104 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0621405989 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115625378732 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461126862589 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426753455061 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811150170783 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200814563772 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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