the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The charts illustrate percentage of Yemeni and italian citizens in three different age group in 2000 and prediction in 2050.
Overall, 15-59-year-old people dominate the majority of population in both Yemen and italy except for the population structure in yemen in 2000.
In 2000, proportion od yemeni at the age of 0-14 was exactly 50.1% while this figure of italian at the same segment was just 14.3%. in contrast, population in the 15-59 years group of italy was 61.6% compared to precisely 46.3% of yemen. 3.6% and 24.1% were the percentage of over 60-year-old yemeni and italian.
In 2050, population structure in both yemen and italy will not change so much. in yemen, the most population will be at the age of 0-59, precisely 37% and 57.3% respectively. this leads to have 5.7% of over 60-year-old yemeni. on the other hand, 11.5% which will be the percentage of teenagers slightly drops on 2000. the remaining part will be the percentage of population from 15 to over 60 in order 46,2% and 42.3%
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- the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, except for, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87209302326 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69734235125 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8814062132 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271907796351 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113198161515 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932515734821 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189168264723 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616150477057 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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