climate change is occurrence which affecting hugely all the people from individual countries.Some people claim that environmental issues is huge that individual can not protect it and only multinational companies can.I believe that this enormous problem can manipulated if all individual contributes and international companies join hands .
Indubitably, great steps are being taken at the international level.In November 2015,The United nations Climate Change Conference Cop21 was held in Paris is a step in this direction.The aim of Cop21 is well known to organize a global agreement on the reduction of climate change to well below 2 degree celsius compared industrial levels.All nation are realizing that climate change is one of the greatest challenges faced by mankind today.
Even though the international cooperation play an important role on climate change,the individual also can make be make a significant difference on environment protection.We can protect by using bag made leaves of tree instead of plastic bag as the planting of tree are being grown.And also we can reduce the carbon dioxide emission by controlling burning the bricks as we should make less high luxurious and can be made residence by wood.
Summing up,the environmental issues is rising more than before as a result the people of the world are suffering trouble.Some people argue that individuals is unable to solve the environmental issues with taking variously steps like international level.
- The pie chart below shows the earning of the City of London for the years 1985 and 1995. These earnings are known as invisible earnings and they showed huge increases in the years studied. The graph shows comparisons between earnings for male and female e 73
- Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.Discuss both views and give your opinion.Give reasons 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54625550661 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14613734749 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0652771724 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 314.75 106.682146367 295% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.75 20.7667163134 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123911584475 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822562640172 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623188356789 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822562640172 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623188356789 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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