The Bar chart shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by select the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.
The following bar chart illustrate the production and consumption of electricity of top ten countries in 2014.
Overall, china is on top of the list of countries in production as well as consumption of electricity.
In contrast, Korea,Rep. is on bottom of the list of countries in production and consumption of electricity.
With regard to production of electricity, china is on rank one by producing 5,398 billion kwh, united states on second rank by producing 4,099billion kwh and 3rd rank is of russia and so on. On last rank of the list is of korea,Rep. by producing 485.1 billion kwh.
With regard to consumption of electricity, china is one the too rank by consuming 5,322 billionkwh, united state is one the 2nd rank by consuming 3,866 billionkwh and on 3rd rank is russia by consuming1,038 billionkwh and so on. On last rank of the list is on Korea,Rep. by consuming 449.5 billionkwh.
However, on the list all the countries are successfully producing the amount of electricity to meet thier need of consumption except Germany.
Germany is the only country in which consumption of electricity is little bit much than thier production of electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, so, well, in contrast, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18652849741 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24780792675 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40414507772 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.0377492838 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4166666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177139948924 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898506152768 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128421735428 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147482463479 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136925722292 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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