Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is believed by some that running libraries and maintaining them is a waste of assets and funds. Hence, Computers should be used instead. While other favors libraries and think they play an important role in people life.
People who support and agrees that Computers should replace libraries have the view point because in today’s time people have less available time to visit libraries due to hectic lifestyles. Even school students have no time to especially go to libraries and search for their answers in books. Now a days, one can find any information about any topic anytime by using a computer. Moreover, it reduces the wait time to find answers significantly Also, significant resources/ people are required to maintain the library.
While others have the opinion that the libraries should be promoted and used regularly. Libraries were the knowledge bank from ancient times and possess the data in more accurate and verified manner. Content written in the books is verified from different sources before it gets published whereas Online content published on website are view point of an individual who has written the content and can misguide the individual if not verified before being practiced. As an example, a guy recently performed an experiment he read online and blasts a battery at home. Also, Blue light which emits from Computers affect the human eye if exposed for long hours.
In my opinion, libraries should not be replaced with Computers. As, both have their own significance in their usage like Computers can be used to find answers easily by professionals who have prior knowledge about certain topics. Not all past material has been digitalized to read online. Also, if we choose to shut down the libraries there will be lose of jobs and Universities need to shut down currently running courses for management of libraries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... and search for their answers in books. Now a days, one can find any information about any...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... search for their answers in books. Now a days, one can find any information about any...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... should not be replaced with Computers. As, both have their own significance in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13114754098 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66055018325 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586885245902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6377443266 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194104676885 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700883625389 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669963308529 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133198532512 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711344834862 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.