Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In this era where money is considered to be the only thing which represents necessities and luxuries on the same time. As with the evolving time span people have started thinking that the process of gifting has changed a bit from past few years. As earlier people use to presents some gifts to be it youngsters or be it any age group children. But these days it has become a trend to offer a younger one with cash and not any thing which might be considered more useful for the child in the terms of their usage.
Fewer people believes that presenting money to the students at teenage makes them responsible and wiser in terms of their money consumption.With the added advantage to this people do also feel that sometimes what one gifts is not always satisfying to the person. And due to this concept this change has been started practiced which has also proved to be more convenient for the person who has to gift a present to the child who is in his or her teens. In addition to that, these days children have a lot more tendency to buy what they want to rather then what is gifted to them. So this serves as a great present to make the younger one his or her own choice to choose what he or he requires.
on the flip side, people believes that giving them cash can be adverse at time as this might involve youth towards the addiction of some in proper activities like gambling , drugs and so on. Therefore teens should not have that much access to be offered gifts in terms of cash which can multiple disadvantages in turning teenagers into what they should not be .
Perhaps, the youth should be taught through different ways that how they should spend their money wisely to meet the habits of saving and investing the money to get profits which can benefit them in a longer term.
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...hich can benefit them in a longer term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48170731707 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3284798006 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9621062545 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.636363636 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8181818182 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143460932952 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605543074065 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344841576175 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865990227477 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325448698429 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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