Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that physical condition is the most important factor which insists players to win the games. Others, however, feel that mental attitudes play a more crucial role. I believe that the joint effort of physical strength and the mental attitude is the key to the success in sports competitions.
On the one hand, the strongest and fittest sports players would have the most competitive edge in winning the games. This is because sports activity demands every athlete taking high-intensity physical training all year around, which may keep them in good body condition. For example, in some individual sports events, such as marathon and weight lifting, they require sportsmen to have a strong body as the core fundamental of the victory. This is also true to team sports like football or volleyball. The winning teams are always consisting of plays who have better physical condition.
On the other hand, it is impossible to deny that a stable mental mind would have a huge influence on one’s success in sports. From the beginning of the sports competition to the end of it, the mind of every sports player would always be on edge, therefore, every athlete need to have high requirements in mental condition. For instance, in the NBA Finals 2016, Golden State Warriors led Cleveland Cavaliers by a large margin. However, the history has always been so dramatic, the basketball plays from Cleveland Cavaliers resisted the pressure to become the champion. This could explain why in the training sessions of athletes, there is not only high-intensive physical training but also courses related to psychology.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both elements in physical and mental are equal to individual and teams’ triumph in sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ss in sports. From the beginning of the sports competition to the end of it, the mind ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ion to the end of it, the mind of every sports player would always be on edge, therefo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16724738676 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72097550624 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3039886491 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145691658396 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518647407031 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487878544696 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103464572842 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402097652649 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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