the graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufactures to produce vehicles

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the graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufactures to produce vehicles

A glance at the graph provided a comparison on how long to manufacture a car through four different brands given in the US between 1998 and 2005.

As seen from the graph, the amount of time producing a car by four factories tended to decrease over the periods, despite some fluctuations.

Regarding the average time spent on the production of a car by General Motor, it was mostly consumed with the figure at thirty-four hours in 1998 compared to precisely twenty-eight hours of Ford. In contrast, the time spent on both Toyota and Honda was at least, which accounted for merely twenty-two hours.

The year 2002 saw a rapid decline to around twenty-five hours in the production times of Motor, then slightly drop by twenty-two hours in 2005. Despite some increases in 2001, the average time manufacturing car by Ford was likely to fall rapidly over the years, then standing at twenty-one hours in 2005. Likewise, there were fluctuating decreases of twenty-four hours in figures of Toyota and Honda by the year 2002, which were followed by a downward trend at twenty hours at the end of the period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, so, then, at least, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92063492063 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72452353094 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.1569942737 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.857142857 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236165202996 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125290653212 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729769689345 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169168585684 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500014790998 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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